(1) The Protection Commission shall advise the improvement of policies, systems, statutes, and regulations to the relevant agency pursuant to Article 7-9 (4) of the Act, along with the details of and reasons for such improvement.

(2) The Protection Commission may request the relevant agency to submit materials about the results of the implementation of its advice in order to examine whether such advice has been implemented pursuant to Article 7-9 (5) of the Act.